Fallan Andito T4 W1

 

WALT: Use our senses to write a description.

Hi People of earth I got another blog for ya'll which is about descriptive writing DUN DUN DUUUUUNNNNNNN. Anyways it was way to hard because it was in paragraphs wait a minute it was easy not hard... :] anyways I had to Do descriptive writing about me falling down a hole which was super fun anyways I hope you enjoy it.

Fallan Andito

[P1]I was running for my life away from the battle field, trying to hide and wait until the war ended. As I tried to find somewhere safe, I found an abandoned Bookshop but right before I reached it, I fell into a pitchblack hole. Fear gripped me as I continued to fall down the mysterious hole. I thought my time was up but I just kept falling down into the dark. [P2] The longer I fall the more petrifying it gets. The sound of clanking gets closer and closer. I see a train that's about to hit me… I opened my eyes, the train wasn't moving, it looked like I stopped time. While time was stopped I climbed aboard the train and inside was a gigantic library with every book in the whole world. When I picked up one book it was filled with stale dust which made me cough a lot. [P3] The book makes my skin feel like I'm rubbing against blunt pieces of shrapnel. Time resumed again and the shafts of the train started spinning. I felt terrified so I just sat down and waited for the train to stop. As the train kept on moving, I kept reading the book I had in my hands. The book fell out of my hands, when it reached the ground I was teleported out of there where I landed in my comfy bed with a huge food supply left by somebody mysterious while I was in the hole while the war was still going on.